Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
Cry for lost strength
When the limbs bow down
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Very nice, Rob. I would changed one word in the last line: 'their' instead of 'there'.
A beautiful and powerful poem adorned with abounding and sparkling images and poetic expressions. Liked the recurring lines that add beauty to this well expressed and executed poetic gem.