Monday, May 27, 2024

Strength Of The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
Cry for lost strength
When the limbs bow down
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Rob Lamberton
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2024

A beautiful and powerful poem adorned with abounding and sparkling images and poetic expressions. Liked the recurring lines that add beauty to this well expressed and executed poetic gem.

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Anjandev Roy 27 May 2024

Brilliant work...... thanks for sharing.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 May 2024

very profoundly powerful Bravo Rob! ! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 27 May 2024

Very nice, Rob. I would changed one word in the last line: 'their' instead of 'there'.

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Rob Lamberton 01 June 2024

Yes, thank you! !

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