Strength Of The Storm Poem by Rob Lamberton

Strength Of The Storm

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Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
Cry for lost strength
When the limbs bow down

Pray with me for that gentle breeze
Not the smoke that burns me down
I ask not for life of ease
Though violent wind are all around

Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
For the day of strength is over
And my eyes are on the cloud

Cry with me but not forever
The blowing smoke it is not night
We can raise our branch to heaven
We can raise the leaves to light

Lament with me for broken branches
For the green fallen to the ground
When for mercy wind is blowing
And for strength we are brought down

The tree has many branches
And a root as strong as might
As for me I know that weather
Give me strength on stormy night

Lament with me the broken branches
For green that's fallen down
For the leaves that ever only
Cast their eyes upon the ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2024

A beautiful and powerful poem adorned with abounding and sparkling images and poetic expressions. Liked the recurring lines that add beauty to this well expressed and executed poetic gem.

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Anjandev Roy 27 May 2024

Brilliant work...... thanks for sharing.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 May 2024

very profoundly powerful Bravo Rob! ! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 27 May 2024

Very nice, Rob. I would changed one word in the last line: 'their' instead of 'there'.

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Rob Lamberton 01 June 2024

Yes, thank you! !

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