Strength Of Character. Comments

That make this poem so strong because it made up with strong lines as each made by concrete heavy metal truth...so nice work, ans so strong with that character, thanks for inviting to your poem :) have a good Eid! _Unwritten Soul

Very Good write here my friend, to me as I read through I felt undertones of the greatest poem ever written If Great work and thanks for the invitation Jon

resistance becomes futile.........wah........the write is so intense and rich in texture........its very bright with all the facts encircling with the attitude and wonder transformation of ego is a sublime way to cope up with all streams of emotions........kudos! !