Saturday, May 19, 2018

Strength Comments

Rating: 5.0

I run into infinity with my arms stretched out wide
I jump as far as I can until my fingers can touch the sky
There's no limits to where life will take me
The obstacles that I've overcome I'm still here standing
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Tamara Turner
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Susan Williams 20 October 2018

Yes! ! ! ! Your strength shines like a beacon of joy in this piece! ! ! ! And that genuine emotion reaches out and stirs your readers to jump up and fight through again and again for the joy of feeling this victorious! ! ! ! That's what happens when a writer lets the words flow from their heart and pen. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kim Barney 19 May 2018

I like your attitude and I like this poem. Keep fighting, and good luck to you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2018

Running towards infinity is great perspective. Where life is taken there is o limit at all. Earth and energy within se; f can be realized. An interesting and brilliant poem is well penned...10

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