Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Strength? Comments

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I don't feel anything.
I am a strong block of marble.
I didn't feel
the immense pain when you
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Alex Night
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Ashley Ormon 05 November 2008

Nice poem. I like how you organized the poem and the idea of a cracked marble. It reminds me of a poem I have written my self. If you have the time read my poem titled 'Eyes of Strength'. Let me know what you thought of it.

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