Monday, December 29, 2008

Strength Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lying in your arms at night,
Watching your strong and broad chest rise and fall,
My mind strays to that fateful night when your smile had me ensnared,
An honest smile it was stretching all the way to your eyes.
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Tara Nugent
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Michael Gale 29 December 2008

Hi Tara. I bet you've been asked this a lot of times but i'll ask any way. Are you related to the singer Ted Nugent? God bless all poets-MJG.

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Michael Gale 29 December 2008

Great poem of love and courtship! Finely written. Gave it a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Shari . 29 December 2008

This is beautiful, it made me remember the first time I was held by a guy. This poem comforted and warmed my heart. Kudos. And i enjoy how your lines flowed and they we around the same length. Compared to the last poem I read, this is better written and less cookie-cutter. I enjoyed it.

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