Monday, September 26, 2011

Streets Of Salvation Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm falling
I'm falling
through
The streets of damnation
...
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Dave Alan Walker
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Bull Frogg 01 April 2012

Excellent! Well done sir.

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Behrad Nafissi 15 November 2011

Great Imagery! Liked it very much!

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Mark Trajano 11 November 2011

Amazing and it evokes strong images. Liked it!

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Ahmed Tokyo 02 October 2011

Great one, With an exqusite idea..Mothers help their children even if they don't exist on earth.. Getting high is a pleasure but a disaster :)

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Unwritten Soul 01 October 2011

Why i missed to read this piece from my good friend's hand? ? ? ....Dave o Dave this is a story that really having special awakening spirit...Good to rise again my friend, dont look back, look in front..There's no way to stay in dark past...Go busier in your street of salvation...Be bright always! _Unwritten Soul

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Efran Menny 01 October 2011

Nice poem, has much power,10++++++

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Liz Bitelove 26 September 2011

very nice poem..thanks for the comment on my mine..

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Uche Chidozie 26 September 2011

Rise son, nobody is created to waste, thanks to you, Dave, you r a great mind.

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Uche Chidozie 26 September 2011

Rise son, nobody is created to waste, thanks to you, Dave, you r a great mind.

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Eric Cockrell 26 September 2011

the battle to live, fought within! very good poem!

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Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

I always love the themes you present in your poetry. Lovely write, my friend. I love this.

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Shadow Girl 26 September 2011

like it...powerful theme...well written, good poetry -SG

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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