Friday, July 20, 2012

Streets Of My Mind Comments

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Walking the streets of my mind
skipping the stones
broken by time
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Dean Loughin
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Valerie Dohren 28 July 2012

Excellent - a story waiting to be told.

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Captain Cur 20 July 2012

Very good start, would like to hear what else is on that street. Plunge down deep. Truth lies in the caverns. Good write.

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Dean Loughin

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San Jose, CA
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