Thursday, January 7, 2016

Streetlight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Use a streetlight
to show me
that things are okay
...
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Maya Hanson
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Terry Craddock 21 January 2016

Point Of Meeting In The Dark a lamp or candle would be classical more romantic a touch of coloured LCD lights more enticing creatively inviting styles tech changing but the streetlight like a lighthouse is an unmistakeable irresistible point of meeting for those in the dark... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Streetlight' by the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) . Dedicated to the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) .

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Terry Craddock 21 January 2016

Streetlights Spaced Controlled Distances interesting illuminous solidity immobility in streetlight images rain fog or clear night shadows Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Streetlight' by the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) . Dedicated to the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) .

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Terry Craddock 21 January 2016

Electricity On Unnoticed streetlights are signs things are ok... at least we know the streetlight works electricity is running without problems Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Streetlight' by the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) . Dedicated to the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) .

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Terry Craddock 21 January 2016

Streetlight Images Luminous Immobility streetlights are signs things are ok... at least we know the streetlight works electricity is running without problems streetlights on poles at measured spaced controlled distances interesting illuminous solidity immobility in streetlight images rain fog or clear night shadows a lamp or candle would be classical more romantic a touch of coloured LCD lights more enticing creatively inviting styles tech changing but the streetlight like a lighthouse is an unmistakeable irresistible point of meeting for those in the dark... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Streetlight' by the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) . Dedicated to the poet Maya Hanson (mye3) .

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 January 2016

'May be this streetlight Can be my salvation A beautiful expression in a beautiful poem with rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Maya Hanson 08 January 2016

Thank you! Yes, there are different types of rhyme, most of my writing doesn't have traditional rhyme but I try to create a rhythm. I appreciate your time!

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Terry Craddock 07 January 2016

'Use a streetlight to show me that things are okay' interesting the solidity immobility of streetlight images, a lamp or candle would be more romantic, a touch coloured LCD lights more enticing creatively inviting, but the streetlight like a lighthouse is an unmistakeable irresistible point of meeting :)

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Maya Hanson 08 January 2016

Thank you so much!

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