Monday, January 5, 2009

Street Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to Mr. Renaud Capuçon, a talented violinist)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Ben Gieske 18 January 2009

The metaphors give meat to the feelings you express and help the imagination. (cobbled/ fishing villages /gripped by passion; flagstones /central fountain /stone walls) . You involve a lot of the senses.

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Gargi Saha 13 January 2009

Well written...........

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 09 January 2009

I ENJOY READING THIS POEM!

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Joseph Poewhit 08 January 2009

Again, I'm ready for that atmosphere.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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