Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Street Of Shame Comments

Rating: 5.0

A street of shame
A street of pain
Rape and drugs, no ones sane
and no ones safe
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Dave Alan Walker
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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 April 2012

What a terrlble place to live. It frightens me.

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Ramesh Rai 20 April 2012

A beautiful poem. i like it.

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Swarnendu Biswas 19 April 2012

Beautiful..A street of shame/A street of pain....is very-well symbolically used....the noun shame really emphasize the diseased side of human-society and by cleverly putting a possession between street and shame, poet hits out at the evil-instinct of human-being.well-done..want more from you.

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Liliana Roman 18 April 2012

preach it my brother. where did anything blame a woman in this poem? anyway, i love it! it shows the truth and hides nothing.

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Heather Wilson 18 April 2012

Sounds rotten (the Street I mean) you have put the point over very well.

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Valerie Dohren 17 April 2012

A bit one-sided methinks. Sounds as if you are blaming women! ! But that's a man thing I guess.

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