Street Life Comments

hey babe dis poem is badass so much about it in little bit of words

Awesome Poem! I do believe we should do more to help the poor but unfortunetly our government does not want to help.: (keep up the good work!

love the poem dude, it made me think of my home town back in Minnesota it's sad jsut how true your poem is

It gives you a good look about what it is like living on the streets and makes you think. Keep up the good writing.

beautifully writ i like it

id say a 10 and wat rissa k.night said ur goin to change duh world ^^ yay u!

this is a really nice poem...sum ppl wouldnt even care about the poor...ur gonna change da world I can tell

nice poem i really enjoyed reading it. keep on writing

The poor will always be with us.All we can hope to do is survive and share.You have a good way of rhyming and raising social conscienceness awareness.Keep writing-we need to be reminded of the less fortunate.A ten from me.BTW I was a hippy and homeless in my younger years but I turned my life around with a little help from my friends.Sometimes all you need is someone to believe in you even if it only yourself. PEACE

I love this poem. I agree with you and feel you on everything you wrote.

homeless ppl make me so sad i just wanna hug them. or build them a house.

HEY ITS YOLY JUST COMIN BY TO SHOW UR POEM DA LOVE IT DESERVES THIS POEM GOT SO MUCH HEART I LOVE IT ITS DIFFERENT FROM WAT IM USED TO....

the life of the streets can make you feel worse only if you have the will power to get out can you tell what will happen life on the streets can never be good unless you want it to be

great work. it really describes life. i love it. keep up the good work. peace out, alexis

very good rhyme scheme dude, which is rare on here

this a wonderful poem

this is a beautiful poem!