Street Children Comments

This is my revisit of your poem.Very exact depiction of street children with a befitting title.Top top scores Madam.

What a touchy and true depiction of street children.Brilliantly crafted.

Street children crawling like rats Waiting for their next meal They are like snakes sleeping on the slimy streets.

Unfortunately, there is injustice and oppression everywhere in the world, a place worse than the other, poverty and homelessness, serious social diseases... politicians are responsible for it. very well penned and poignant poem 10/10

Another profound analysis of the plight of the homeless children, their childhood devastated.... food for thought for every human being

(3) The government of that country, every country in the world, must take care of them through their organized foundations, organization or whatever. Children are the future of every country. The great poetess has written this poem in such words that my body shivers with indignation and at the same time with deep sorrow. Through this dedicated poem, I learned a lot about these deserted street children. God Blesses. ToMyPoemList. A 10 FullScore

(2) A magnificent poem is created thinking of these street children, in any country of the world. A loving heart and thoughts of the great poetess, truly a gorgeous write from an honest heart. Let´s read how the first lines start: Street children are roaming around the streets While the dark sky Pours the earth with tears................children may never roam, in none country. My tears keep coming again.

This is a heart wrenching poem, I have read it so many times and again my eyes became wet. kids so young and deserted. Indonesia was a corrupt country, but I have never seen kids as these. This has to do with poverty in a country, and I must admit that Indonesia is a very fertile and rich country. (2)

greatly penned the poem /// street child and parent around the streets, world streets everyday survives in struggle everyday dies subconsciously of skyscraper child and parents! ! !

Oh poor children They mature before their time Starvation is a day to day scene They could die anytime And anywhere Without seeing the rising Sun.... very sensitive write.//

Very touching...sometimes life has to face a bad destiny wherein abandoned children are snared...let us hope and pray for such people's betterment...thank you Rose for this thought provoking write

Oh poor children They mature before their time Starvation is a day to day scene They could die anytime And anywhere Without seeing the rising Sun... Very sensitive poem of hard reality...thanks

The truth spelt out touchingly and every word reminds us in a land rich in harvest children must not go hungry....outstanding piece.....10+++++++

A thought-provoking and touching write. When poets become the voice of the voiceless, they are at their best. A much needed call to the predicament homeless and deprived people have to face. A poem that shakes the heart and awakes the conscience. A big 10.

Very heart-rending picture but realistic. And yet street children mature fast, for, they have to, being left to their own devices and never protected. Alas no one is sure they'd see the next rising sun. A beautiful poem portrait indeed

Sadness! ! ! ! Street Children all over the World! ! ! ! ! ! Man's Government. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is heartbreaking. We see this day in and day out in crowded places. What hurts me most is the fact that these children are portrayed by fundraising organizations in all sort of advertising tool and it is acceptable. At the same time helping a child on street by an individual is discouraged. Encouraging beggars.....not acceptable, no matter how intense is the hardship.

This is a wake up call for the authorities to act with political will to save the street children from their worst situation. A noble write, dear ate Rose.....10+++++

Very wisely written. Great observation. Thank u. anjandev roy.

An excellent depiction of lives of street children! A wonderful poem.. Beautifully penned..10