Friday, July 18, 2014

Street Child Under A Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Street child under a shadow

Did they take away my larynx
Why is it that I have no voice
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Atlay Mwenifumbo
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Wow! An intense and glaring look at the lives of street children! Having nothing, no voice to complain, no one to share the pain of poverty, only the prayers in their little hearts, hoping to bring change. Parents doing the best they can with nothing but their souls. Charity is only a word when not accompanied by a compassionate soul. What a beautiful expression, vividly expressed in your poem. I give you a 10! Love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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