Saturday, August 29, 2020

Streams Of Strumpets And Their Souses Comments

Rating: 5.0

In skimpy sleeveless tops, strumpets
In rows teeming with lust blow trumpets
Snatching bucks from souses
Who snap them into sleazy houses
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John Sensele
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Denis Mair 30 August 2020

This poem viscerally conveys a Hogarthian or Otto Dix-like vision of society's underbelly. Self-indulgence as enslavement; fueled by alcohol...as aspiration dies on the ladder of hollow sensation! BLINDED BY PUNY PRIDE HUNG TIED/ TO STAIRS OF FLESH FLEX./ What a waste! A 10 for hard-hitting lines.

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