Streaming Thoughts Comments

nice poem. loved the ways you made it so creative and the way you started it made it that much stronger to the end.

This is a very good. I read some of the others. But this I think is my favorite. =)

I agree; I enjoy reading your use of nature in this piece

I love the water metaphor. Life really boils down to the challenge in your last two lines. It is a battle of perspective and balance. But when we spend so much of our time, swimming the rapids and being tossed about like debris in a tornadic storm, don't we deserve at least a little occasional cloud lounging? : P Provided of course, we know the reality of our circumstances. This was a perfectly worded piece. I don't think there are many who couldn't relate.