Sunday, March 18, 2007

Streaming Consciousness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do ponder on
The questions life
Has sent me.
Over priced.
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Laoibhse Ni Canain
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David Desantis 22 April 2008

'who wants violent vibrations'- excellent, excellent, excellent- nuff said p.s.- u better not be alone

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

hey dear.......i loved your mind........what you have inside you..........pretty cool kinda piece...........lovely great..........

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Declan McHenry 30 March 2007

A clever piece indeed. Finely done. Finely done.

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Margaret Alice 29 March 2007

So well written - my sentiments exactly - only I think we are happier dreaming our dreams than sharing the feast with unfeeling others - knowing the handshake and smile will never be returned. Just be prepared to be disappointed, expect the unexpected, and keep your dreams safe where nobody can touch them - and you'll be okay. See how well you have written - you made me philosophise about life! Keep writing, Kind regards, Margaret.

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Alison Cassidy 28 March 2007

Fascinating stream of consciousness (funny, I wrote this before I actually read your title!) from someone who thinks too much - and writes very well. This one reminds me of my son whose dark dog has troubled him for years. Accessible, articulate penning. love Allie xxxx

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