we got one more stream,
stream of water, air, of three dimensions
stream of consciousness,
it is of five dimensions.
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The way you have articulated and treated the subject makes the poem a pleasure to read. Thanks. locus of thoughts.... that travels fulllogical length, or dies halfway like a desert river,
Stream of consciousness/it is of five dimensions........insightful analysis of the term 'Consciousness'! I would further quote, five senses put inputs into you/and you put it in the Thought Register/locus of thoughts. Thanks for presenting a piece of write that carries meticulous and in-depth analysis of the key facet of human psyche!