Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Stray Cat Café Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a dreary day too poor for a name,
He dragged himself down to the little café,
Flat white and a paper, always the same,
He fumbled for coins and something to say,
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Dean Meredith
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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020

'As soon as she smiled, his fears departed, And that praise God was how it all started' - loved these concluding lines. The opening line too is wonderful!

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 March 2020

imaginatively written; good poem penned

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Kim Barney 05 October 2014

Nice Poem. I hope the name of the place is not an indication of what's on the menu!

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Aman Arora 03 July 2014

I like the description.

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Smoky Hoss 26 November 2011

What fun! We need a sequel to find what happens next!

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Patti Masterman 14 November 2011

What an adorable piece. I think I have fallen in love with the Stray Cat Cafe. Wish that I could go there right this instant, teleport myself in to watch the drama going on.

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