Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Strawberry Soul's Caterpillar Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strawberry soul running in cold
Reminiscing the old days of innocence
When you was a child, love was the wild
And a lie had no significance
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Sara Tehrani
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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