Thursday, August 22, 2013

Strawberry Shortcake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Skipping scallops
so she still swallows
her dessert-
she sits staring
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R.Benjamin Abate
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 August 2013

She stresses about something to skip the dessert. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 22 August 2013

Short and sweet, a great poem, like it.

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R.Benjamin Abate

R.Benjamin Abate

Mattydale, NY
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