Sunday, September 8, 2013

Strawberry Comments

Rating: 2.5

I'm not flame if you don't come.
I'll consistently grow old
and quietly die out
if your eye doesn't pick me.
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East Sea Fairy Xing Yi
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Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2020

You should come to save me. A touching poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

Beautiful poem..you should come to save me..loved reading it.

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Thank you for your comment, Geetha Jayakumar

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

A nice poem. 'I walk on the way from the tip of grass to the moon high now drifting on water and then in dire straits or stuck in a tree You should come to save me.' A nice desire well expressed, but I wonder why the title is 'Strawberry'!

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because strawberry is heartshaped, haha. thank you for your comment

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