Monday, January 2, 2006

Stratosphere Comments

Rating: 4.8

I dig my toes into sand
grab at the sky with both hands
Melt with me somewhere in between
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Lori Boulard
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Robert Howard 15 November 2006

Beautiful. What is reached for is not really defined but is a matter of life and death. Then there is the title. Oh my! Robert

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Max Reif 09 January 2006

This is sweet, the human body as a bridge uniting heaven and earth. Childlike, also profound. 'Love of earth or fear of heaven' is a nice touch. I don't exactly know just how 'a broken compass for a heart' fits. (I'm sometimes challenged by imaginative flights, so it's not necessarily a flaw.)

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