Thursday, August 13, 2009

Strategy (Senryu) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shampoo Strategy
Lather, rinse and then repeat
Works effectively
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Sandra Martyres
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Me too! I liked the second one best, but they all had your strategy philosophy. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Priyanka Bhowmick 13 August 2009

nice collection of senryus.. i liked the 2nd one the most....

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Ted M 13 August 2009

Shampoo strategy - Then lot of money wasted, (when young) now lot of hair wasted down the drain Simple smile - Smiled at the beautiful lady next door, saw an instant frown appear on her face Culprits beware - Long hand of the law can reach you, that's it! Do I see a frown on your face. Smile, this is a nice one, Was just joking. Nice short write; Only felt as though I was brought back from Disneyland halfway through. Cheers, keep writing.10

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Rakesh Bedi 13 August 2009

..... nice senryus, sandra.......

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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2009

good one Sandra- irony and wry humour- good strategy for Senryu Mamta

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Catrina Heart 13 August 2009

Fantastic senryu......I loved your first stanza most...10+++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 August 2009

fine senryu's sandra...the last one not very relevent in india...here th laws hands have shaken hands with culprits

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