Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Stranglehold Comments

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i take a deep breath and i take you in
your scent warms my body, god this is a sin.
Miles above the ground i think im flying.
My air cuts out, i think im dying.
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Chris O'Keeffe
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

I don't mind admitting that this one completely baffles me. There is something here that I am missing. I simply don't understand the poem. The meaning is clothed in confusion. Whatever it means, it will require a lengthy explanation. Perhaps that is why there is none in the poem. GW62

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