Thursday, October 13, 2005

Strangled Comments

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Here is life
Once no gain
It’s hard enough
To get rid of the pain
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Lynn samantha
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Collin C 11 February 2006

I love that design lol.

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Steffi Webster 20 October 2005

It's great the way your lines go in a shape. I had to do that once at school but I couldn't do it. I have my own style. I know that my poems are sometimes sort of long but take a look at the one called the bully by-stander. I'd really like to know what you think. Thanks.

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