Wednesday, December 18, 2013

Strangers Comments

Rating: 4.8

As strangers we meet again,
So far apart,
Battling our devilish memories,
We try to forget the nightmares.
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Lucifera Santez
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Valerie Dohren 23 December 2013

Powerful write with some great lines - tendrils of recognition unfurl, brilliant.

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Andrew Barber 20 December 2013

A deep poem that paints nasty emotions we all sadly feel (at one time or another) but all hide from! The poem carries you on a journey, half of you wanting to read on, half of you wanting to stop. This is a message from the heart, a cry from the shadow, a need for some light. Well done!

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