Thursday, January 21, 2010

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I find it hard to put into words what I feel
It feels so heavy
So much to share
But words seem to fail me once again
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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins
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Aastha Uppal 21 January 2010

great work... emotions pouring out beautifully... the uncertainity of something and everything in life.. which makes us feel trapped but we don't exactly know what it is.... nicely written! ! !

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Wayne Bowen 21 January 2010

Nice poem; ; good expression of feelings. Keep it up. My poem 'insecure' express the same thought in the same way. Wayne

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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Johannesburg, South Africa
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