Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Stranger Still Comments

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He is as God
when he smiles

casting his arm
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Kara Entriken
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Afzal Shauq 03 August 2009

He is as God when he smiles casting his arm curling his fingers to stroke the fevered spine of an abandoned child gifting both comfort and disquiet yes i agree with your idea and what you express is done well..a master piece small poem with long story about pride and proudness is hidden inside it in these few verses.. means you are a good and very rich poet... like the style you do poems..well done..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

love is eveything humans.

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