People - so strange
I cannot read their heart
I stand there glaring at their smile
And I am lost
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Discern- I descried In every face so strange Ephemeral smile, delusive eyes A heart beats, with feeling so same...........God if i had visionto look into all deceptive facts...... well one can know with the passage of time... it is usual happening around and se must fully know it...so nice poem....10 wel done aprana
it is common for us in india.says ' he looks like a god man'.looks are always deceptive.very interesting poem indeed. voted10 surya
Smile- is deceptive It is out of love, happiness, pain And with twinkle in eye I wondered wow what a lovely poem is this one and its really deep inside and touching soul..because your verses about smile is a support and smile is my dream to prmote being a best tool of war as i say her ((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) 10/10
NICELY WRITTEN WITH AN UNIVERSAL TRUTH. I DEDICATE THIS FOR YOU; YOU ARE GENIUS WITH YOUR HONESTY, I RESPECT YOUR VIEW FULL OF DIGNITY. I WANT TO CRY WITH YOU I REALLY ADMIRE YOU.
And as I saw deep In hard rain, under the shade of same tree I felt her agony first time There was water in her eyes too Just like me. Sound so personal, so familiar. How many times do people go through in a life time. And how many of us. Its so common place. Yes, a stranger poet, you are a stranger no more. Emotion beautifully captured. Looks like you wrote it to describe your readers.
A new life in a strange sorrounding...entrusting also difficult...perplexed emotions well said....excellent
the wanting to connect with someone in an alien land (when you are far away from where you felt you actually belong) leads you into a turmoil. But, a poet is a stranger/oustider everywhere..8/10
This poem shows once again Why you are my blue eyed girl 10+
An illusive moment of adoration, written so well and vivid.I love your writes Aparna.
Simple but thoughtful poem. Thank you Aparna.Write more and more..Best wishes
a beautiful free verse which moves one's heart.10+