Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Stranger No More... Comments

Rating: 4.8

People - so strange
I cannot read their heart
I stand there glaring at their smile
And I am lost
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Aparna Sinha
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moribund love 31 October 2009

a beautiful free verse which moves one's heart.10+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 October 2009

Discern- I descried In every face so strange Ephemeral smile, delusive eyes A heart beats, with feeling so same...........God if i had visionto look into all deceptive facts...... well one can know with the passage of time... it is usual happening around and se must fully know it...so nice poem....10 wel done aprana

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Surya . 25 September 2009

it is common for us in india.says ' he looks like a god man'.looks are always deceptive.very interesting poem indeed. voted10 surya

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Afzal Shauq 25 September 2009

Smile- is deceptive It is out of love, happiness, pain And with twinkle in eye I wondered wow what a lovely poem is this one and its really deep inside and touching soul..because your verses about smile is a support and smile is my dream to prmote being a best tool of war as i say her ((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) 10/10

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Anand Madhukar 22 September 2009

Heartrendingly beautiful. A moving piece.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 September 2009

I am touched by your words! 10+

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Sanjib Das 18 September 2009

NICELY WRITTEN WITH AN UNIVERSAL TRUTH. I DEDICATE THIS FOR YOU; YOU ARE GENIUS WITH YOUR HONESTY, I RESPECT YOUR VIEW FULL OF DIGNITY. I WANT TO CRY WITH YOU I REALLY ADMIRE YOU.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 September 2009

that each is like the other is well brought out...

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Ranjeet Rain 15 September 2009

And as I saw deep In hard rain, under the shade of same tree I felt her agony first time There was water in her eyes too Just like me. Sound so personal, so familiar. How many times do people go through in a life time. And how many of us. Its so common place. Yes, a stranger poet, you are a stranger no more. Emotion beautifully captured. Looks like you wrote it to describe your readers.

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Michelle Melody 10 August 2009

A Lovely poem Aparna... smiles are oft deceiving

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Indira Renganathan 07 August 2009

A new life in a strange sorrounding...entrusting also difficult...perplexed emotions well said....excellent

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Mystic Indian 05 August 2009

the wanting to connect with someone in an alien land (when you are far away from where you felt you actually belong) leads you into a turmoil. But, a poet is a stranger/oustider everywhere..8/10

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Putholi Arumugham 03 August 2009

This poem shows once again Why you are my blue eyed girl 10+

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Anjali Sinha 02 August 2009

nice i had teary eyes too -10 anjali

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a heartfelt write so well expressed

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 July 2009

An illusive moment of adoration, written so well and vivid.I love your writes Aparna.

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Siddharth Singh 29 July 2009

yeah smile is really deceptive... very well written.

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Braja K Sarkar 29 July 2009

Simple but thoughtful poem. Thank you Aparna.Write more and more..Best wishes

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