Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Stranger In West Lothian Comments

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As I walk alone in the Rain
Where I go, is a Lonely path
I feel alone, lost and cold
If you were me right now,
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Ashleigh Leona Mellon
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Ashleigh Mellon 31 March 2012

there is a meaning ringing true to this poem...... I was walking Alone in the rain, Where I go, It's A Lonely Path these lines mean that I am always lonely, I try to make friends but I keep failing I took the chorus from the reference to this poem, How Does it feel? How Do you feel? when you're alone and cold Inside I took it from MJ Song (Michael Jackson) Stranger In Moscow and tweaked it, Stranger In West Lothian so, I think this poem to me has a special meaning Mr. Fitzgerald. Even at home And College I am lonely, I find a place on my own, away from my classmates, and sometimes have a heartbreaking moment to myself and cry, The line- They Break Me, Belittle Me Shows that this is about my lonliness due to people in my class bullying me.

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Griffn Fitzgerald 27 March 2012

This made me cry, it is absolutely beautiful and i mean that

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Ashleigh Leona Mellon

Ashleigh Leona Mellon

Armadale, West Lothian, Scotland
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