Friday, October 11, 2019

Stranger In The Night Comments

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I met a stranger at the forest road fork
Tired and weary I slowed down to talk
Will he bide his time, converse with me
With his appearance I might not agree.
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Frederick Nellist
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Bri Edwards 01 October 2020

In the move from stanza 3 to st. four, i think, in st.3, the narrator speaks followed by the stranger speaking. Then, in st.4, only the narrator speaks. i wish this were more clear. Perhaps you chose " poetry" as the topic so as to save coming up with something more descriptive? OR PH didn't like your choice(s) ? it's ok. to MyPoemList, probably to share later with others. bri ;)

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