Stranger In The Grove Comments

Well done Grace. What a beautiful poem. The metaphors and similes you chose to convey your feelings (rumbling train) and memories of a man (dying roots that sunlight can't reach) speak volumes. This is a heartfelt and well written poem. Keep 'em coming! Thanks.

The train ambles through my coal studded heart... oh my goodness this line stopped my heart! Such a gorgeous poem... new poet for my poet list :)