Saturday, January 31, 2009

Stranger Comments

Rating: 4.5

An invisible gap between us.
But I saw it.
A perfect stranger.
But I knew you.
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Rashidah Rahman
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Dr Kamran Haider 08 February 2009

Rhyming is not important in poetry but the thought and flow should be there and you have got that... nicely written...

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Omar Ibrahim 08 February 2009

perfect poem but try to write with the ryhme.......

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Joseph Poewhit 31 January 2009

Just never know in life.

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