Saturday, March 31, 2007

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You're drawn into the abyssal blankness
Wondering if that's afterlife or the irrevocable end
A new immaterial existence bordering on madness
Is virulent, and you're going slowly around a bend
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Aram Stefanian
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Herbert Nehrlich1 31 March 2007

I don't know what abyssal means and the rest of the poem is a good try but it doesn't succeed. If English is NOT your native tongue that would explain it. H

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