Monday, December 11, 2006

Stranger Comments

Rating: 4.0

He wasn’t handsome;
He didn’t look smart.
He didn’t seem wealthy.
He walked without art.
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Helen Wilson
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Barry Van Allen 10 January 2007

Helen, It is a little bit chilly now ! SO, every 180 degrees that we can get is O.K.!

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Francesca Johnson 11 December 2006

Lovely turnaround at the end, Helen. A smile and a warm greeting can make all the difference. Love, Fran xx

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Catastrophe King 11 December 2006

WOW...... Helen.... This is just a wonderful piece of literature! You have constructed the poem with so much of word-power.... the rhythm is astounding, you just out-excelled all of us! The theme is so clear - within the simplicity of the language, I hope you write more and more!

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