Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was a fallen star to a fairy-land,
Caged by the shadow of lonliness
Where he yelled for light in his mind
To break the veil of strangeness,
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Valsa George 22 July 2012

He wandered through unknown streams...../// Rolling the beads of time in his life's rosary....Beautiful lines! ! A good poem!

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Wahab Abdul 15 March 2012

we are all strangers to each other, we are all strangers to other things also, we do know only the appearance and not the reality.A very good poem i like it.

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Walterrean Salley 28 January 2012

A very interesting and beutiful writing. insight on what it is to be a stranger - something no one wants to be. Voted 10.

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Dave Walker 25 January 2012

A really fantastic write. A truly great poem.

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 23 January 2012

Well written Vipins.. Rolling the Beads of time in life's rosary.. That was a cracker!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 January 2012

amazing in thought evolvation.

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Unwritten Soul 20 January 2012

When heart is open to accept it breaks a words, close a door...that word is stranger, and the door is distrust...when you welcome something to come inside call it as pure as the wind sound, sure it will feel you calm..and let they stranger changed when it receive your windy welcome so they will stand for always, and always there for you..Vipins, it such a beautiful poem! ! give u all mark as u want_Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 19 January 2012

Our moments of stardom tend often not to last. Whenever I rise a bit on the social or professional ladder, I pray to our Creator to let me remain humble, not to climb the pedestal but to keep my both feet on the ground. If we choose the pedestal, the fall can be hard. It can be really difficult to recover. Loneliness can be huge but if we manage to count our blessings, there is always a new friend just around the next corner. Let us really start a kindness revolution and make the situation in the cartoon, described in my poem, a firm yes, a warm reality. You have written another fantastic thought provoking poem, Vipins. I really enjoyed reading it and it made me reflect. Well done. Hans

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Jacqui Broad 19 January 2012

Wonderful, truly magnificent! Strangers to some situations of different people, and yet, when it comes to love we are strangers no more. A very universal feeling!

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Anhelica Velasquez 19 January 2012

wonderful! the way the words just flow together, its like they were suposed to be that way anyway! magnificent, nice poem.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 January 2012

superb poem my friend.wonderful choice of words...a realy great write..

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Ahmed Khaled 18 January 2012

harmony and perfection, two great concepts you are working on in this outstandingly beautiful poem if this another methodology to keep on trials so keep on these trials till the wanted got, good luck AK

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Ahmed Khaled 18 January 2012

great expressive poem, a great method of writing blended with a greater idea in thinking as you are trying in the hard way to get the most perfect, for this i say to you keep on because your trials are working, my so beloved friend AK

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 January 2012

Rolling the beads.....in his life's rosary: Poetry is in sweetful and meaningful lines like this! Wonderful! Cheers!

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Binish Cd 18 January 2012

in the life we also feel as a stranger in lot of situations......this really a variety poem which analyze the mind of a stranger. And the selection of the subject is also to be appreciated...............really a great write.10+++

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Dave Walker 18 January 2012

A really fantastic poem. A really wonderful write.

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