Wednesday, October 17, 2018

Strange Traveler Through The Woods... Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the foggy, trembling night
I met a traveler with haunting sight
He sat on horse half tilted right
With a candle burning so bright
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Naila Rais
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Varsha M 27 December 2020

Beautiful rhyming flow keeping us hooked till the end. Ghostly freaks oh so much imagery...good one.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 February 2019

YOU GET SO MANY COMMENTS PLUS 23 I GET HARDLY ANY BUT AM READ BY MANY U 22222 NR

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Naila Rais 28 December 2019

Is it so..? Btw this poem is imaginary. Naila

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Hans Vr 11 November 2018

The rhythm and rhymes in the poem, give the story wings. Superb poetry!

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 November 2018

Such a wonderful poem indeed. Enjoyed the story and soothing rhyming. Thanks for posting.

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Naila Rais 07 November 2018

Welcome sir............... :) Naila

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

The use of metaphor is brilliant and the story line is perfect to give a feel of the stranger travelling through an unknown path without knowing where he is going. Great write, thanks for sharing it.10+++

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Thank you so much sir................................ Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2018

BEFORE I lose you too o friendly poet I would appreciate a special favour comment on my latest poem Why They Hurt before I lose poetic only friendship with you. I'd hate to lose my friend in an upcoming poet as you yes you So Hence I will not comment ever again if it helps you

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Naila Rais 01 November 2018

Oh no................................... What happened? ?

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Abhipsa Panda 30 October 2018

very beautifully penned...loved your lines....

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Nice to hear from you! :) Naila

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

Creepy poem, well written.Serves its purpose perfectly!

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Thanks for your words.......... Naila

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

A great rhyming poem, I think I can hear the traveler whistling. A great write.

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Are you afraid then...? ? Naila

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Zefi Ar 28 October 2018

Ghosts freaks and goblins shouts, ..... Sounds horrible

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Naila Rais 28 October 2018

Thnx... Daring person he is.. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

I regret errors made unintentionally ur poetry is lovoleee keep at it charm lies in words intermingled with a breathlessness with love you excel young girl Keep at it one day you will soonly say the poet me has gone away 10000000 ager he twill be perfect for me keep reading as I DO too NR newer poetess thanks to u

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Naila Rais 28 October 2018

Kkk.... No problem.... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2018

that thou forgivest is the greatest quality of a poet

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

now ur looking @18 but your DOB IN PROFILE IS NOT MATCHING 2005? / PLEASE CORRECT UR AGE GUYS WILL BE SCARED IF UR UNDERAGE LOOK INTO IT PL NAILA

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Naila Rais 27 October 2018

Uhuhhh... Who u r to guess my age...... Your way of looking can't define someone's age..... First of all, r u sure it's my pic... Or just a rather one..... Second: u can't say it is looking 18.....if u put yourself u will look thousands.. Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 October 2018

Life reduced to nothing But nothing Honor besmirched And looked upon Like a piece of dirt...creating fear.. ghost figure, darkness, the man. in the dark woods, whistling....... very nice poem and the word endings... superb dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Thank uuuu so much sir..... You are always inspiring..... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2018

And the guy handed his reigns to the hose perhaps all may say so that he too could silently lay like the horse nice poem N

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Naila Rais 02 November 2018

Kkk...... Thnx u liked.... Naila

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Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2018

Add a comment.nice poem, dexterous presentation.

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Naila Rais 18 October 2018

Thnx so much..... Ur words are always motivating.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2018

Foggy trembling night has amazed mind. A crazy man passing by crazy forest road perceives nightmares. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Naila Rais 18 October 2018

Thnx sir for your amazing words...... Naila

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