In the foggy, trembling night
I met a traveler with haunting sight
He sat on horse half tilted right
With a candle burning so bright
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The rhythm and rhymes in the poem, give the story wings. Superb poetry!
Such a wonderful poem indeed. Enjoyed the story and soothing rhyming. Thanks for posting.
The use of metaphor is brilliant and the story line is perfect to give a feel of the stranger travelling through an unknown path without knowing where he is going. Great write, thanks for sharing it.10+++
BEFORE I lose you too o friendly poet I would appreciate a special favour comment on my latest poem Why They Hurt before I lose poetic only friendship with you. I'd hate to lose my friend in an upcoming poet as you yes you So Hence I will not comment ever again if it helps you
A great rhyming poem, I think I can hear the traveler whistling. A great write.
I regret errors made unintentionally ur poetry is lovoleee keep at it charm lies in words intermingled with a breathlessness with love you excel young girl Keep at it one day you will soonly say the poet me has gone away 10000000 ager he twill be perfect for me keep reading as I DO too NR newer poetess thanks to u
now ur looking @18 but your DOB IN PROFILE IS NOT MATCHING 2005? / PLEASE CORRECT UR AGE GUYS WILL BE SCARED IF UR UNDERAGE LOOK INTO IT PL NAILA
Uhuhhh... Who u r to guess my age...... Your way of looking can't define someone's age..... First of all, r u sure it's my pic... Or just a rather one..... Second: u can't say it is looking 18.....if u put yourself u will look thousands.. Naila
Life reduced to nothing But nothing Honor besmirched And looked upon Like a piece of dirt...creating fear.. ghost figure, darkness, the man. in the dark woods, whistling....... very nice poem and the word endings... superb dear poetess. thank u. tony
And the guy handed his reigns to the hose perhaps all may say so that he too could silently lay like the horse nice poem N
Foggy trembling night has amazed mind. A crazy man passing by crazy forest road perceives nightmares. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10
Beautiful rhyming flow keeping us hooked till the end. Ghostly freaks oh so much imagery...good one.