Friday, September 15, 2017

Strange Thought Comments

Rating: 4.5

How to move when u r stuck
How to step forward if ur feet are chained in the ground
Chained by uncertainties
The courageous heart is nowhere to find
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Wild Grass Cad
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Bri Edwards 19 March 2018

your poet name drew me in. i would not use maybe as in I maybe bound to suffer hill. i'd use I may be... or I maybe am bound... and did you mean hill or ill? i especially enjoyed the first six lines of the poem. bri ;)

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Wild Grass Cad 16 April 2018

Yeah dat shoukdnbe mAy be.. Ive noticed that before but didnt have time to edit.. Lol.. Its reay hill. :) thanks for commenting. I appreciate it so so much

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Cherry. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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