Strange Relationship Comments
There are no words left to say;
How broken and torn my heart is;
Life seems to just fade away;
Leaving my mind lonely and cold.
...
Read full text
a fascinating poem about a strange relationship, imagined or real (for YOU) ? ? i'd like to know why you place semi-colons at the end of each line, except the last of each stanza. hmm? otherwise i applaud your grammar and poetic execution [not death execution! ]. to MyPoemList. bri :)
Thanks a lot Sir for your kind words! ! ! For me its real, precisely speaking was... I use semicolon as a breathe pause and honestly speaking I never gave much thought to whether it was correct to use at the end of every sentence. :) shall definitely try to correct the error next time. Thanks for pointing it out.
As I held the hands of the night; I heard my restless soul cry; touching and disturbing... a poem that clings to the mind and conveys the feelings eminantly liked
perfect Poem to narrate a Dismay. WOnderfully written with such flow of meaning. Thank you for sharing Poet! 10+++
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/21/2025 12:43:12 AM # 1.0.0
i plan to include your poem in my upcoming December 2018 showcase (of poems from PH) . any questions? just ask! ! bri (:
Thanks a lot Sir! ! I feel honored that my poem has been selected.