Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Strange Moods Of Rain – Rain & Wind Comments

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A big plop on my cheek
A wet kiss
As I looked up to see
Whether it was going
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Angelina Pandian
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2009

The breeze too became gentle Caressing me in its sweep It stroked away my pain Both friends made amends And I was cooled to my soul! so poetic but so innocence too.. i loved the theme.. so much satisfaction in sour and that what the rain means.....10 come home... home bound(my poems)

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premji premji 16 August 2009

angel....... so lovely you write....... so poetic the feelings........ i am the wind.. and the rain.......................

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