Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Strange Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

He never bought her roses
Never said she was sweet
No gifts to delight her
No fine lines to greet
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Divya Gupta 02 November 2013

It reminded me my strange love..strange bt great 1..

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Neetha Sasidharan 21 August 2013

nice and strange poem.....lyked it for its strangness......kp going....

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Patricia Grantham 05 June 2013

Even though his love was strange beneath that exterior lied a love that was true. Some people really don't know how to express love. He only drove her away by not expressing that love. Love comes to us and we throw it all away. Please read my poem Love Scorned, Love Forlorned Enjoyed it.

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Farah Ilyas 05 June 2013

sincerity of love demands only happiness of her/his beloved, nothing else..he is pure by heart in his love, may be... He knew he was awful But still he was thinking Beneath the wane moon He was slowly sinking Seeking for answers why she was away He loved his lover in strange own his way..heart rendered lines

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Chandra Thiagarajan 04 June 2013

A love so unresponsive is really strange!

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2013

Many men are unable to express themselves, which is a shame as it so often leads to misunderstandings and broken relationships.

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Shahzia Batool 29 May 2013

Rebels are also human beings.aren't they?

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Captain Cur 28 May 2013

We all love in strange ways, but we use the fiction of flowers, cards and niceties to express that which is difficult, if not impossible to express. Well thought our poem. I am all about nice when I am not plundering. Crap, the first three numbers on the submit came up 666. I am sending anyway, wish me luck.

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Ruby Mostazir 27 May 2013

it migth be a 1 sided love....1 sided love is always painful. lines are so touchy.....

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Saadat Tahir 26 May 2013

A page out of Alberto Moravia-like twisted he/she relationships a common enough phenomenon, not often seen expressed poetically, kudos for this effort. highlights and underlines such a hugely important issue, it is so often swept under the heavy stifling carpet of tradition and hyped up unseemliness. Contextually rich and intriguing nice....liked

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Yasmin Khan 25 May 2013

So he loves her but does not believe in expressing it. Can we say his love is deep and sincere and he feels that words are just superficial? an emotional poem well-penned

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Neela Nath Das 25 May 2013

Wow! his personality is rather different from the rest.Every person has his/her particular way to show love. Great Kanav!

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Unwritten Soul 24 May 2013

Well when a strange person fall in love of course then become a strange lover, and dont complaint about strangeness because he always like that like people say accept it or dont do it...so thats good for stranger lover..just dont be odd maybe hahaha_Soul

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Hazel Durham 24 May 2013

He couldn't express his love like as if he was trapped inside himself, but his love went deep! A very original and poignant write!

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Kavya . 24 May 2013

good one....everybody's way of loving is unique, this one though strange seems to be a true love

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Jahan Zeb 23 May 2013

The title enticed me. and then as expected a touching piece my friend. very good lines. The sad touch and intensity in Love.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2013

slowly sinking, good one. Invite you to read my poems and comment.

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