Monday, March 3, 2014

Strange Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

I have some ideas,
But they're all tangled up,
Feelings premiere, but are not way on top,
I am confused, Doubt's Runner-Up,
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Sandra Feldman
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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2014

A wonderful poem. The mystic philosophy of our misty lives, often not apprehensible unless delved deep, leaves for us the perpetual enigma: 'No one will tell me, 'the coast is clear' Nor why we live, nor why we're here, ' And perhaps, so is the summary of your beautiful poem: 'So I'll go on, day in and day out, Still wondering and not finding out, What this Strange Life is all about.' Very well written, Sandra!

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Valerie Dohren 05 March 2014

It is indeed a strange life, which no-one understands. Well said and written.

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