Strange Dreams Comments

Wonderful writing, and thinking. I enjoyed this very much.

A true and inspired poem. A little theology behind it? Great read, enjoyed it!

Haunting! You have great vision. 'And the end will make us free'.

i like this one but don't want to go into theology and all that or there would be no poetry written. we could talk about God till the cows come home. like St. Paul i am a convert and base my simple faith on a benign Being who has all our interests at heart. john o'connell

Great improvement my friend...I am glad you did it, there is still plenty of time for more excellent poems from you to the whole world....Keep it up...

the poem has been rewritten and enlarged / yours GG

Your poem explores that which binds us all - an abiding need to understand and make sense of our world. The poem is nicely phrased and the final stanza in particular lingers in the mind's eye. Look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Interesting piece, sir. The style is slightly reminiscent of Blake.

Excellent, well penned, beautiful poem, you got my vote10+++