Strange Dream (In Progress: -)) Comments

Oh, I love this! 'Pure' entertainment, if you want to, but it´s also possible to read this fantastic story as an allegory. The elephant, trying to reach seemingly impossible goals. And the deliverer - wouldn´t he better try to get that poor elephant out of his dilemma once and for all? It´s a great story no matter how you read it!

Oh my god. I was just cracking up at this. It's my favorite new poem. Thank you for your wondrous, endlessly entertaining imagination. (smile)

A very different sort of poem in a way that what you actually saw in a dream was very strange and a little funny and you have put that in a very elegant way using your idealogy that it depicts like a story being written with mastery........ Absolute 10 Best Wishes Sameer