Strange!
What a strange world
No one is true
No one has faith.
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So naïve I listen to your tale Like a prisoner I am in your jail. A touching and thoughtful poem.
thank you so much Geeta, for the kind comment, it is encouraging me more and more.
So well written, Hassan. Your style is attractive with metaphors in tune with nature, birds and flowers.
Sadly, its a strange and fake world we live in. A beautiful poem but a sad one too. Warm regards, Bipasha
A nice poetic imagination, Hayati. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Another sweet and beautiful creation of words by you, i really enjoyed reading the flowy words with touching words...i think it is thoughtful and lovely!
I really need these kind attention and appreciate the time and attention you have shown.
At present maximum people of the world are such that they can't be trusted. They are like birds to sit, not to fly. There is chaos in our everyday life and we have nothing to tell like a tied bird or a prisoner in the jail. Dear Hassan, you have so nicely inscribed this in your poem that I appreciate very much. It is really a fantastic philosophical poem touching to psychology. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks a lot.
Dorood and Sepas to Mr Akhtar Jawad who is always a support to me.