Monday, December 28, 2015

Strange Communication Comments

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Everybody is too busy,
To pay attention to others,
Anonymously yours,
Closes most human doors.
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 13 February 2016

texting is not for me too abstract old-fashioned talking is nice

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Daniel Brick 06 January 2016

WE WANT TO COMMUNICATE - that's the desire that runs through this poem, and other desires cluster around that one showing how central communication is to our species. On one side of that desire is loneliness, on the other, union. Your poem moves toward Union of Beings. TO PAY ATTENTION TO OTHERS seems so easy and yet it is an activity shadowed by our machines, computers, iphones - so many disguises interfering with our human contact. But your poem gives me confidence the want, the need, the desire TO BE IN TOUCH will triumph!

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