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And if the frost makes the flower
Then it blooms unbidden
And spills out
All terrible colour
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Lauren Michaels
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Goldy Locks 27 October 2007

like an omen. the flower plays an omen. scholarly use of `knell.' definitely inspiring work, Lauren. i rather like (if i could make a change) : And if the frost makes the flower / Then it blooms forbidden. best care, sjg

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Marc Mannheimer 25 October 2007

That was very good. The last line, definitely disturbing

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