Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, March 25, 2012

Strange Are Ways Comments

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Strange are the ways human beings prefer
Adopt double standard and willingly offer
All sorts of arguments to suit guilty mind
Yet claim morality and show to be kind
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 26 March 2012

The first verse really shows great emotion and touches on human selfishness....but i must say that the remaining verse sound a bit different from the first....you are talking of a girl who you loved but broke your heart or sumthing...the rhyming is nice but the first and the rest seem quite contrasting....+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

4 hours ago « Delete » GINA Why you have me so dizzy with this nonsense at yours? ? ? I miss him! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .... this I feel.. this I know.. this I write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's clear? ?

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Kumar Parashar 25 March 2012

nice one......simple idea and beautiful description... way to go

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Re: Strange are ways (Score: 1) by ossy on Sunday, March 25,2012 (15: 19: 50) Keeping up with such steady rhyming and a good blending write is something poetic mastery could afford. Its a wonderful write you have here my friend and I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Jugnu She seems to be an unstable weak personality, she should better be forgotten and left to her conditions, as unpleasant endings are always unwelcomed. Nice write, Sir!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Strange are the ways human beings prefer Adopt double standard and willingly offer All sorts of arguments to suit guilty mind Yet claim morality and show to be kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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