Suddenly, a visage
With a hushed leap
Rushed past the mirror
Black and yellow stripes
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I could picture your pain crying out for it to cease. It s sad but true but not everyone let's us know in detailed words so well done.
It seems to be both a micro- and macro- cosmic pictures in few words... :)
i am yet again in awe of you. your poetry is so beautiful, please write more because i would love to see more of what you can do. :)
completely stunning poetry... very unique one I don’t know how the joints dismantled the mouth broadened back the fangs crop up the gaze emblazed the toes curled back the spine stretched out the skin turned into hide From where this bushy tail sprang up In the caverns of being, Where did I vanish, roaring? I don’t know a thing! I really loved this part....while reading this part a full picture was drawn in my mind through your writing....sequence by sequence each line captivated me. You have a memorable.., smooth and sensitive Writing May Allah bess you always
Another impressive and though provoking write! I love the imagery within this excellent poem. You definitely have what it takes to make through the POETRY WORLD! Keep it up! 10+++ well deserved! Love and Peace for always! ...
I really like this poem. Bien!